Semi-cryptic paragraphs revised; terms that either needed hyphenation (stand alone) or just consolidation (chip set) were appropriately modified. Typographical revisions (x11 -> X11; rXXX -> RXXX) were made as needed. Reproducible: Always Steps to Reproduce: 1. 2. 3.
Created attachment 61543 [details, diff] Paragraph revisions. Wordy sentences modified to increase terseness.
Created attachment 61544 [details, diff] Typographical corrections. Several typographical changes were made to the document (e.g. x11 was changed to X11; The rXXX GPU numbers were changed to RXXX) to match the actual terms.
folajimi: when you make diffs, please use the following command: diff -Nut oldfile newfile would you mind resubmitting the patches?
Created attachment 62447 [details, diff] Paragraph revisions.
Created attachment 62448 [details, diff] Typographical corrections.
Created attachment 62449 [details, diff] Typographical corrections. Passed -Nut option to the 'diff' command as requested.
Created attachment 62450 [details, diff] Paragraph revisions. Passed -Nut option to the 'diff' command as requested.
Created attachment 62451 [details, diff] Integrated patch. I cannot ascertain whether the individual patches I submitted earlier will work. Therefore, I am submitting a single patch that has not been 'touched.'
Thanks, most of the patches are applied. Mind you though, your patches are all made from the new version to the old one (called a "reverse patch"); please use "diff -ut <oldversion> <newversion>", not "diff -ut <newversion> <oldversion>". I left a paragraph untouched that was entered due to a bug report earlier (don't want to remove fixes we applied ;)
