I've updated the Quik section, added a section on yaboot failure and recovery, fixed an error in ALSA section and a few other assorted fixes.
Created attachment 61079 [details, diff] Suggested patch.
Created attachment 61161 [details, diff] Fixed a few more things
Hmm, GDP has a coding style which I'll need to point you at. - You use indentation for paragraphs (not allowed) - You use indentation for an entire section (not allowed) If you fix those, I'm okay with it.
Created attachment 61370 [details, diff] PPC FAQ update Sorry about that. I've fixed other DocXML style errors in the FAQ as well. There may be some left, but I think I got most of them. Thanks
You don't need newlines between each author, just before and after the entire group. There's also no need for a newline before the title of a chapter/section. Comments should best be placed before the command. Try having all commands inside a <pre> with "<i>...</i>". Have all comments in a <comment>...</comment>. I'll attach a patch that fixes most of that; should be commit-ready.
Created attachment 61376 [details, diff] Gentoo PPC FAQ patch
Thanks for all of your help. In CVS.