92318 – Grammatical mistake in x86 install tips and tricks

Bug 92318 - Grammatical mistake in x86 install tips and tricks

Summary: Grammatical mistake in x86 install tips and tricks

Status:	RESOLVED FIXED

Alias:	None

Product:	[OLD] Docs-user
Classification:	Unclassified
Component:	Other (show other bugs)
Hardware:	All Linux

Importance:	High trivial (vote)
Assignee:	Xavier Neys (RETIRED)

URL:	http://www.gentoo.org/doc/en/gentoo-x...
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Reported:	2005-05-11 17:24 UTC by Leung Ki Chi
Modified:	2005-05-12 02:40 UTC (History)
CC List:	1 user (show)

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Dumb Patch (gentoo-x86-tipsntricks-grammar.patch,537 bytes, patch) 2005-05-12 00:39 UTC, Shyam Mani (RETIRED)	Details \| Diff
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Description Leung Ki Chi 2005-05-11 17:24:18 UTC

There's a grammar mistake in the x86 install tips and tricks document.

Just after the "Software RAID" header in "2. Advanced installations", it states in the Note:

"Note: If you are not known to software raid, please read the Software-RAID-HOWTO."

"If you are not known to software raid ..." is incorrect English. It should be either: "If you are new to software raid ..." (sounds more accurate IMO), or "If you do not know what software raid is ...".

Reproducible: Always
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Comment 1 Shyam Mani (RETIRED) gentoo-dev

2005-05-11 18:48:02 UTC

Agreed, will put up a patch.

Comment 2 Shyam Mani (RETIRED) gentoo-dev

2005-05-12 00:39:56 UTC

Created attachment 58731 [details, diff]
Dumb Patch

Patch will fix the bug, thanks for reporting!

Comment 3 Xavier Neys (RETIRED) gentoo-dev

2005-05-12 02:40:39 UTC

Fixed. Thanks for reporting.