Bug 9009 – Security Guide needs major grammar/ spelling check

• Status: RESOLVED FIXED
• Product: [OLD] Docs-user

[Description John Davis (zhen) (RETIRED) 2002-10-11 01:31:20 UTC]

The security guide needs some major grammar and spelling checking. Sunflare, 
can you copyedit it please?

//ZhEN

[Comment 1 Phil Bordelon (sunflare) 2002-10-11 08:04:04 UTC]

Aye.  I'll have to remember how the heck to find the original XML source, but
that shouldn't be /too/ bad. ;)  It's in gentoo-src, right?

[Comment 2 John Davis (zhen) (RETIRED) 2002-10-11 16:58:00 UTC]

Yeah, it is in gentoo-src/gentoo-web/xml/doc/en.
Happy hunting ;-)

//ZhEN

[Comment 3 John Davis (zhen) (RETIRED) 2002-10-31 13:54:26 UTC]

Eric, please take care of this. I am not sure where Phil went. All that is 
needed is some spell/grammar checking etc..

Thanks,
//ZhEN

[Comment 4 Phil Bordelon (sunflare) 2002-10-31 14:01:30 UTC]

I started work on a rewrite of the document, due to the bad form it was
in--simple grammar and spelling checks didn't seem to be enough to bring it up
to Full Gentoo Standards.  However, I've had -5hr/week free time this semester
(yes, that's a negative number), so I haven't done /anything/ with it in the
last few weeks.  Thanks for moving it to Eric.

[Comment 5 John Davis (zhen) (RETIRED) 2002-11-04 16:31:40 UTC]

I can definately understand the class issue, I am swamped here too. You are 
more than welcome to work on it still if you want too ;-)

Cheers,
//ZhEN

[Comment 6 John Davis (zhen) (RETIRED) 2002-12-02 11:53:50 UTC]

this was done awhile ago.
//ZhEN