I recently received constructive comments out of the blue from an outside source, Katarina BA. I applied them, along with a few fixes of my own. Please include the following patch in the next update.
Created attachment 38969 [details, diff] hb-policy-etiquette.xml.diff Against v1.5.
Sidenote: There is a typo in the changes, "Packaging unsupported patches unsupported patches" shouldn't be repeated twice. I'll add this in shortly, without that typo.
Done in CVS; the change should reach the web nodes fairly soon.