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Bug 53944 - grammatical errors in source_mirrors.xml
Summary: grammatical errors in source_mirrors.xml
Status: RESOLVED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: [OLD] Docs-user
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Other (show other bugs)
Hardware: All All
: Lowest trivial (vote)
Assignee: Docs Team
URL: http://www.gentoo.org/doc/en/source_m...
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Reported: 2004-06-14 22:44 UTC by Jon Hood (RETIRED)
Modified: 2004-06-15 00:25 UTC (History)
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Attachments
the not-as-bad-grammar source_mirrors.xml (source_mirrors.xml,5.45 KB, text/plain)
2004-06-14 22:46 UTC, Jon Hood (RETIRED)
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Description Jon Hood (RETIRED) gentoo-dev 2004-06-14 22:44:05 UTC
Naughty naughty! My English teacher would have a fit at our documentation team. Anyways, I was reading through a bit of the documentation and decided to go ahead and make little corrections here-and-there. The updated .xml document will be attached. It's the middle of the night here, so no telling how many new errors I've introduced!
Comment 1 Jon Hood (RETIRED) gentoo-dev 2004-06-14 22:46:31 UTC
Created attachment 33282 [details]
the not-as-bad-grammar source_mirrors.xml

I still don't think this is A+ work, but a few of the comma splices are gone
and a bit of the wording is changed. Oh, and remember to capitalize letters if
they start a sentence!
Comment 2 Benny Chuang (RETIRED) gentoo-dev 2004-06-15 00:25:52 UTC
fixed in cvs, thanks!