Naughty naughty! My English teacher would have a fit at our documentation team. Anyways, I was reading through a bit of the documentation and decided to go ahead and make little corrections here-and-there. The updated .xml document will be attached. It's the middle of the night here, so no telling how many new errors I've introduced!
Created attachment 33282 [details] the not-as-bad-grammar source_mirrors.xml I still don't think this is A+ work, but a few of the comma splices are gone and a bit of the wording is changed. Oh, and remember to capitalize letters if they start a sentence!
fixed in cvs, thanks!