Hi, I made the following changes: Added information on SYN cookies Added information on logcheck Added information on chkrootkit Various grammar fixes, many rewordings and syntax-fixes Changed many infra-document links to use the ``id'' attribute Changed the order of a few of the daemons to put the ftp daemons together My patch includes jaervosz' patch (http://bugs.gentoo.org/show_bug.cgi?id=51297). Apologies for any formatting changes. Reproducible: Always Steps to Reproduce:
Created attachment 32269 [details, diff] gentoo-security.xml patch Patch includes jaervosz' changes at http://bugs.gentoo.org/show_bug.cgi?id=51297
Submitted patch is a _lot_ shorter than the jaervosz' one. Please submit a new one. Thanks.
Wait, what? My patch is shorter than jaervosz'? It contains all the fixes he sent me via e-mail. I'll check his patch, though.
Created attachment 32784 [details, diff] Fixed attachment Sorry. Looks like it didn't upload before. Should have checked.
Created attachment 32785 [details, diff] really fixed attachment please forgive my repeated incompetence.
Created attachment 32787 [details, diff] gentoo-security.xml patch This path is substantively the same but eliminates some needless formatting changes. Apologies once again.
Hi Dan, your patch is a reverted one (i.e. it converts the updated guide back into the old guide).
Created attachment 34650 [details, diff] updated I swear. I'm not usuaully this bad. Updated patch...
Heh, you easily forget pressing your spacebar :) s/anattacker/an attacker/ s/atleast/at least/ etc. I'll take a look at the patch and commit once reviewed ;)
Wow. And to think that's the result of me proof-reading! Thanks, though. I hope it contains at least something valuable ;)
Committed to CVS.
