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Bug 468752 - proj/en/qa/autofailure.xml needs linguistic revision (bad grammar, wrong word choices, incomprehensible passages)
Summary: proj/en/qa/autofailure.xml needs linguistic revision (bad grammar, wrong word...
Status: RESOLVED OBSOLETE
Alias: None
Product: [OLD] Docs on www.gentoo.org
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Other documents (show other bugs)
Hardware: All Linux
: Normal minor (vote)
Assignee: Gentoo Quality Assurance Team
URL: http://www.gentoo.org/proj/en/qa/auto...
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Reported: 2013-05-06 12:24 UTC by Roman Žilka
Modified: 2016-06-16 12:16 UTC (History)
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Description Roman Žilka 2013-05-06 12:24:23 UTC
http://www.gentoo.org/proj/en/qa/autofailure.xml contains some bad English. Very often it's mixing subjects in singular with verbs in plural or vice versa. Some words are nonsensical, but the overall meaning is usually easily understood. Comprehensibility is nil here, though: "older packages often does not use automake and libtool instead" (§1). Presumably, there are other such spots - I only read the first section.

By the way, the article is 5 years old. I'm not claiming it contains outdated info - I know little about autotools to judge. Just FYI.

Since it's mostly minor mistakes, I offer a correction of the full article. I can mark and leave untouched the spots whose intended meaning I don't know. I'm a non-native, CAE+ level speaker. If you're interested, let me know and provide the source file I should edit (or is it the xml I can fetch directly?).

Reproducible: Always
Comment 2 Michał Górny archtester Gentoo Infrastructure gentoo-dev Security 2016-06-16 12:16:36 UTC
GuideXML docs are no longer there.