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Bug 30259 - several typos in the english Gentoo IPv6 Guide
Summary: several typos in the english Gentoo IPv6 Guide
Status: RESOLVED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: [OLD] Docs-user
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Other (show other bugs)
Hardware: All Linux
: High minor (vote)
Assignee: Sven Vermeulen (RETIRED)
URL:
Whiteboard:
Keywords:
Depends on:
Blocks:
 
Reported: 2003-10-03 10:05 UTC by Camille Huot (RETIRED)
Modified: 2003-10-05 04:21 UTC (History)
2 users (show)

See Also:
Package list:
Runtime testing required: ---


Attachments
ipv6.xml.patch.gz (ipv6.xml.patch,681 bytes, patch)
2003-10-03 10:10 UTC, Camille Huot (RETIRED)
Details | Diff
ipv6.xml.patch (ipv6.xml.patch,1.20 KB, patch)
2003-10-04 03:09 UTC, Camille Huot (RETIRED)
Details | Diff

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Description Camille Huot (RETIRED) gentoo-dev 2003-10-03 10:05:45 UTC
In the file /doc/en/ipv6.xml I've found some typos, during its translation:

l. 103: a linebreak is missing
l. 229: s/USE/ACCEPT_KEYWORDS/
l. 520: the exact command is "sysctl -w net.ipv6.conf.all.forwarding=1"

And a deprecated notice:

l. 224-225: the package freenet6 isn't masked anymore

Reproducible: Always
Steps to Reproduce:
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Additionnally, it should be nice to have the ARPA zone file for the BIND configuration
Comment 1 Camille Huot (RETIRED) gentoo-dev 2003-10-03 10:10:55 UTC
Created attachment 18682 [details, diff]
ipv6.xml.patch.gz

A proposed patch that fixes these bugs.
Comment 2 Sven Vermeulen (RETIRED) gentoo-dev 2003-10-04 02:02:36 UTC
Camille, could you in the future provide non-compressed patches? That makes
it easier to view the patch online to make first impressions.
Comment 3 Camille Huot (RETIRED) gentoo-dev 2003-10-04 03:09:40 UTC
Created attachment 18721 [details, diff]
ipv6.xml.patch

non gziped patch, sorry for inconvenience.
Comment 4 Sven Vermeulen (RETIRED) gentoo-dev 2003-10-04 08:09:31 UTC
Thanks for the patch. It looks sane. I've committed it to CVS so the changes
should be make public in less than an hour. I'm reassigning to latexer so
that he can take a look regarding the ARPA zone file.
Comment 5 Sven Vermeulen (RETIRED) gentoo-dev 2003-10-04 10:34:08 UTC
Taking away from latexer again :)
Comment 6 Camille Huot (RETIRED) gentoo-dev 2003-10-04 10:42:45 UTC
Forgot the ARPA-related comment,
the last RFC3364 explicitly says that we should use INT instead of ARPA for
IPv6 reverse DNS.
Comment 7 Sven Vermeulen (RETIRED) gentoo-dev 2003-10-05 04:21:53 UTC
Then this bug is fixed.