257227 – A patch for hb-install-alpha-disk.xml of the networked handbook

Bug 257227 - A patch for hb-install-alpha-disk.xml of the networked handbook

Summary: A patch for hb-install-alpha-disk.xml of the networked handbook

Status:	RESOLVED FIXED

Alias:	None

Product:	[OLD] Docs on www.gentoo.org
Classification:	Unclassified
Component:	Installation Handbook (show other bugs)
Hardware:	All Linux

Importance:	High minor (vote)
Assignee:	Łukasz Damentko (RETIRED)

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Reported:	2009-02-01 15:09 UTC by Ernestas Liubarskij
Modified:	2009-02-15 06:48 UTC (History)
CC List:	1 user (show)

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A patch for hb-install-alpha-disk.xml (hb-install-alpha-disk.xml.diff,1.66 KB, patch) 2009-02-01 15:10 UTC, Ernestas Liubarskij	Details \| Diff
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Description Ernestas Liubarskij 2009-02-01 15:09:11 UTC

I've found a few minor issues with doc/en/handbook/hb-install-alpha-disk.xml while translating it. However, I'm not sure if all of these really need fixing.

1. The word "partition" is used instead of "slice" in a few places where you're talking about slices. The first three parts of my patch fix this.
2. At line 504 it's written "We will create a swap partition starting at the THIRD cylinder", however, a few lines below (at line 515) the partition is created starting from the 17th cylinder.
3. At line 708 it's written "we mount the ROOT and BOOT partition", however, at line 712 only one (root) partition is mounted.

Comment 1 Ernestas Liubarskij 2009-02-01 15:10:59 UTC

Created attachment 180550 [details, diff]
A patch for hb-install-alpha-disk.xml

Comment 2 Łukasz Damentko (RETIRED) gentoo-dev

2009-02-15 06:48:11 UTC

In CVS. Thanks for the patch and apologies it took so long.