253374 – Minor/trivial bugs in installation handbook.

Bug 253374 - Minor/trivial bugs in installation handbook.

Summary: Minor/trivial bugs in installation handbook.

Status:	RESOLVED FIXED

Alias:	None

Product:	[OLD] Docs on www.gentoo.org
Classification:	Unclassified
Component:	Installation Handbook (show other bugs)
Hardware:	All Linux

Importance:	High trivial (vote)
Assignee:	nm (RETIRED)

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Reported:	2009-01-01 17:36 UTC by Stefan Salewski
Modified:	2009-01-26 08:04 UTC (History)
CC List:	1 user (show)

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Description Stefan Salewski 2009-01-01 17:36:40 UTC

I have detected again two minor bugs in documentation:

http://www.gentoo.org/doc/en/handbook/handbook-amd64.xml?part=1&chap=1

"You can install Gentoo in many different ways. You can download and install from one of our Installation CDs, from an existing distribution,"

I think the term "from an existing distribution" is ugly.

We may replace it by something like "from an already installed system". 

http://www.gentoo.org/doc/en/handbook/handbook-amd64.xml?part=1&chap=4

"Now that your partitions are created, you can now continue with Creating Filesystems."

I would remove the second "now".

Regards

Stefan Salewski


Reproducible: Always

Comment 1 nm (RETIRED) gentoo-dev

2009-01-26 08:04:32 UTC

Fixed in CVS.