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Bug 17261 - Minor Errors/Change Suggestions for 1.4_rc3 Documentation
Summary: Minor Errors/Change Suggestions for 1.4_rc3 Documentation
Status: RESOLVED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: Gentoo Release Media
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Everything (show other bugs)
Hardware: All Linux
: High normal (vote)
Assignee: Sven Vermeulen (RETIRED)
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Reported: 2003-03-10 18:42 UTC by Joe
Modified: 2005-03-25 11:24 UTC (History)
1 user (show)

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Description Joe 2003-03-10 18:42:39 UTC
I could be wrong about some (all?) of these, but my installation would have gone
smoother with the following changes to the docs:

1. In section 7 (Mount Partitions), command "mkdir /mnt/gentoo" fails because
the directory already exists. Either this command is not required as of 1.4_rc3
or there is a bug in the installation routine for 1.4_rc3.

2. In section 9 (Unpacking the Stage Tarball), the filename in the tar command
is incorrect. The command should read as follows:

tar -xvjpf /mnt/cdrom/gentoo/stage?-*.tar.bz2

3. In section 16 (Installing the kernel and a System Logger), the following
lines should be moved below code listing 16.3 to prevent users from entering the
commands before reading the code listing:

# make dep && make clean bzImage modules modules_install
# cp /usr/src/linux/arch/i386/boot/bzImage /boot

4. In section 18 (Modifying /etc/fstab for your machine), the instructions
should state explicitly that the file should be edited with nano using the "-w"
switch. Adding the following example should be sufficient:

nano -w /etc/fstab

5. In section 26 (Installation complete), if the user began the installlation
from a bootable CD, that CD should be removed once the computer has been
restarted. Otherwise, the computer will boot off of the CD again.

Thank you for your time!

Reproducible: Always
Steps to Reproduce:
Comment 1 Joe 2003-03-11 20:15:53 UTC
Since this bug is open, here are a few more suggested changes.

6. Section 8 states that if the user has the 3 stages live CD, then all they have to do is copy the tarball of their choice to /mnt/gentoo. However, the tar command in code listing 9.1 extracts the tarball directly from the CD. Since it seems a waste of disk space to copy the tarball to /mnt/gentoo if we are going to extract it directly from the CD anyway, perhaps the sentence about copying the tarball in section 8 should be removed.

7. In section 24, code listing 24.6 has a line that reads "root=/dev/hda3", but the last bullet point below the listing reads "root=/dev/hda5". The last bullet point needs to be changed to match code listing 24.6.

8. In section 25, the user should be told to insert a blank diskette into the floppy drive before entering the commands in listings 25.1 or 25.2.

Once again, thank you for your time!
Comment 2 Jorge Paulo (RETIRED) gentoo-dev 2003-06-23 18:21:11 UTC
Will review and commit required changes.
Comment 3 Sven Vermeulen (RETIRED) gentoo-dev 2003-08-04 07:40:59 UTC
All these items have been addressed in the upcoming Gentoo 1.4 Installation Guide (bug #25802) which will be uploaded shortly.
Comment 4 Sven Vermeulen (RETIRED) gentoo-dev 2003-08-05 01:51:00 UTC
The new installation guide has been committed.
Comment 5 Chris Gianelloni (RETIRED) gentoo-dev 2005-03-25 11:24:03 UTC
Moving these so we can remove the "Install CD" component from "Gentoo Linux".

I apologize to everyone for this spam, but according to the bugzilla developers,
this is the only reasonable way to do this.