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Bug 158385 - [es] new translation: chroot.xml (1.0)
Summary: [es] new translation: chroot.xml (1.0)
Status: RESOLVED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: Doc Translations
Classification: Unclassified
Component: [ES] (show other bugs)
Hardware: All Linux
: High normal (vote)
Assignee: Jose Luis Rivero (yoswink) (RETIRED)
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Reported: 2006-12-17 09:07 UTC by Jaime Gascon Romero
Modified: 2006-12-17 16:08 UTC (History)
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Attachments
chroot.xml (chroot.xml,9.49 KB, application/xml)
2006-12-17 09:09 UTC, Jaime Gascon Romero
Details
chroot.xml (chroot.xml,9.51 KB, application/xml)
2006-12-17 11:43 UTC, Jaime Gascon Romero
Details

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Description Jaime Gascon Romero 2006-12-17 09:07:38 UTC
new translation: /proj/en/base/amd64/howtos/chroot.xml (1.0)
Comment 1 Jaime Gascon Romero 2006-12-17 09:09:51 UTC
Created attachment 104220 [details]
chroot.xml
Comment 2 Jose Luis Rivero (yoswink) (RETIRED) gentoo-dev 2006-12-17 10:39:27 UTC
Jaime thanks for the translation, but I think we need to work a little bit more on it to solve some problems:

1. Although the doc isn't under the GDP scope (out of /doc/) it's better to follow the gdp xml rules: http://www.gentoo.org/doc/es/xml-guide.xml. Remember that we use lines no longer than 80 chars and put blank lines after some tags ("Estilo de codificaci
Comment 3 Jose Luis Rivero (yoswink) (RETIRED) gentoo-dev 2006-12-17 10:39:27 UTC
Jaime thanks for the translation, but I think we need to work a little bit more on it to solve some problems:

1. Although the doc isn't under the GDP scope (out of /doc/) it's better to follow the gdp xml rules: http://www.gentoo.org/doc/es/xml-guide.xml. Remember that we use lines no longer than 80 chars and put blank lines after some tags ("Estilo de codificación interno" in the previous doc).

2. It's better not to use the second person and find a more formal way (third person, sometimes) to use with verbs. 
An example: ejecuta -better-> ejecute -even better-> se ejecuta

You can attach here a new version with the fixes, if you want.

Anyway, thanks for the work and welcome to the team.
Comment 4 Jaime Gascon Romero 2006-12-17 11:43:21 UTC
Created attachment 104236 [details]
chroot.xml

Changelog: 
1.- Fixed coding style to follow gdp xml rules
2.- Fixed form of address: second -> third person

Thanks for the corrections.
Comment 5 Jose Luis Rivero (yoswink) (RETIRED) gentoo-dev 2006-12-17 16:08:11 UTC
Yay! thanks for the fixes. Now is in the cvs.

A couple of tips:

1. Next time, you can mark your previous attachment as "obsolete" when submit the new version, just cosmetical ;)

2. English gerunds are usually translated as Spanish infinitives in pre captions fields. Example: "Running ethereal" -> "Ejecutar ethereal".

No more, thanks for all the work.