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Bug 123879 - web: hardenedfaq.xml: Poor English
Summary: web: hardenedfaq.xml: Poor English
Status: RESOLVED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: Documentation
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Project-specific documentation (show other bugs)
Hardware: All Linux
: High normal
Assignee: The Gentoo Linux Hardened Team
URL: http://www.gentoo.org/proj/en/hardene...
Whiteboard:
Keywords:
Depends on:
Blocks:
 
Reported: 2006-02-23 19:28 UTC by Jan Minar
Modified: 2006-09-26 14:51 UTC (History)
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Description Jan Minar 2006-02-23 19:28:31 UTC 
The Hardened FAQ sports some not very good English.  Apart from obvious ungrammaticallities, the whole thing feels quite non-native.  To avoid the wiki effect, somebody with a good command of English should have a look at it.

Quoting "http://www.gentoo.org/proj/en/hardened/hardenedfaq.xml":

Note: Gentoo patches it's GCCs to allow a specfiles to be [...]
                     ^^^^ its          ^^^ no article
Comment 1 Jakub Moc (RETIRED) gentoo-dev 2006-02-24 02:27:24 UTC 
Wrong product, reassigning.
Comment 2 Kevin F. Quinn (RETIRED) gentoo-dev 2006-09-26 14:51:43 UTC 
Fixed the stuff specifically mentioned.

P.S. "ungrammaticallities" is not a word :)  If it was, it would have a single 'l'.

Such pedantry aside, feel free to propose other tidyups if you want to review the FAQ (reopen this bug if you do).