"Text snippet of concern" followed by quick fix or "quoted suggestion." "know what to install and what not." "know what to install and what not to." "dbus, hal and ivman as well after which you add each one of them to the default run level:" "dbus, hal and ivman as well. Afterwards, you will need to add each to the default run level:" (Basically, the original wording felt a bit jumbled towards the end) "the more your CPU will be stressed." Consider including "memory" as well. Many seem to be surprised that their ram has been depleted, even though the more savvy will agree with the docs next sentence. Under "Installing Language Packs," consider adding a link to country codes used for LINGUAS. "type startx every time)" Append a comma "KDM as graphical login manager." "KDM as the graphical login manager." When discussing DMA under section 4, perhaps link back to the handbook (chapter 2) for an example on how to enable DMA if it is not set. Reproducible: Always Steps to Reproduce: 1. 2. 3.
Changing Summary so we don't have n bugs with the same summary and also this type of summary is less confusing and provides a one shot insight about the doc in question.
(In reply to comment #1) Thanks. I'll begin using that format. Still very new to bugs, so if you have any other suggestions, I'd be quite receptive.
Most of the suggestions in this case weren't exactly valid, so I've junked them. The KDM line is fixed.