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Bug 102029 - kde-config typo corrections and suggestions for clarity
Summary: kde-config typo corrections and suggestions for clarity
Status: RESOLVED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: [OLD] Docs-user
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Other (show other bugs)
Hardware: All All
: High trivial (vote)
Assignee: Docs Team
URL: http://www.gentoo.org/doc/en/kde-conf...
Whiteboard:
Keywords:
Depends on:
Blocks:
 
Reported: 2005-08-10 11:57 UTC by Erik Musick
Modified: 2005-09-09 03:29 UTC (History)
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Description Erik Musick 2005-08-10 11:57:24 UTC
"Text snippet of concern" followed by quick fix or "quoted suggestion."         

"know what to install and what not."  "know what to install and what not to."

"dbus, hal and ivman as well after which you add each one of them to the default
run level:"  "dbus, hal and ivman as well. Afterwards, you will need to add each
to the default run level:" (Basically, the original wording felt a bit jumbled
towards the end)

"the more your CPU will be stressed."  Consider including "memory" as well. Many
seem to be surprised that their ram has been depleted, even though the more
savvy will agree with the docs next sentence.

Under "Installing Language Packs," consider adding a link to country codes used
for LINGUAS.

"type startx every time)"  Append a comma

"KDM as graphical login manager."  "KDM as the graphical login manager."

When discussing DMA under section 4, perhaps link back to the handbook (chapter
2) for an example on how to enable DMA if it is not set.

Reproducible: Always
Steps to Reproduce:
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Comment 1 Shyam Mani (RETIRED) gentoo-dev 2005-08-10 12:07:27 UTC
Changing Summary so we don't have n bugs with the same summary and also this
type of summary is less confusing and provides a one shot insight about the doc
in question.
Comment 2 Erik Musick 2005-08-10 12:23:14 UTC
(In reply to comment #1)

Thanks. I'll begin using that format. Still very new to bugs, so if you have any
other suggestions, I'd be quite receptive.
Comment 3 Shyam Mani (RETIRED) gentoo-dev 2005-09-09 03:29:42 UTC
Most of the suggestions in this case weren't exactly valid, so I've junked them.
The KDM line is fixed.