Bug 99058

Summary:	SELinux index page readability improvements
Product:	[OLD] Docs-user	Reporter:	nm (RETIRED) <nightmorph>
Component:	Other	Assignee:	Shyam Mani (RETIRED) <fox2mike>
Status:	RESOLVED FIXED
Severity:	trivial	CC:	docs-team, selinux
Priority:	High
Version:	unspecified
Hardware:	All
OS:	Linux
URL:	http://www.gentoo.org/proj/en/hardened/selinux/
Whiteboard:
Package list:		Runtime testing required:	---
Attachments:	readability improvements!

Description nm (RETIRED) gentoo-dev

2005-07-14 17:39:48 UTC

Yes, this should probably go to the SELinux project. But there doesn't seem to
be a bugzilla section dedicated to security documentation in that project, so
I'm placing the bug here. Swift thinks it's a good idea to start reporting all
doc bugs here anyway ;)

So, I made some readability improvments/fixings to the main SELinux index.html.
Reworded a couple of paragraphs to eliminate consecutive duplicate sentences.
Also fixed minor English technicalities--pluralization, punctuation, etc. Patch
is attached. Have a nice [caffeinated] day [night]!

Reproducible: Always
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Comment 1 nm (RETIRED) gentoo-dev

2005-07-14 17:41:01 UTC

Created attachment 63424 [details, diff]
readability improvements!

Comment 2 Shyam Mani (RETIRED) gentoo-dev

2005-07-14 21:33:25 UTC

One minor thing, the page is index.xml and not index.html ;)

CCing the SELinux team for info purposes.

Comment 3 Shyam Mani (RETIRED) gentoo-dev

2005-07-14 22:00:16 UTC

Fixed in CVS, thanks for the patch!