Bug 95580

Summary:	Grammer/typo and code listing corrections
Product:	[OLD] Docs-user	Reporter:	Curtis Napier (RETIRED) <curtis119>
Component:	Handbook	Assignee:	Shyam Mani (RETIRED) <fox2mike>
Status:	RESOLVED FIXED
Severity:	trivial	CC:	docs-team
Priority:	High
Version:	unspecified
Hardware:	All
OS:	Linux
URL:	http://www.gentoo.org/doc/en/handbook/handbook-x86.xml?part=4&chap=2#doc_chap3
Whiteboard:
Package list:		Runtime testing required:	---
Attachments:	hb-net-advanced.diff

Description Curtis Napier (RETIRED) gentoo-dev

2005-06-09 10:15:51 UTC

In /doc/en/handbook/hb-net-advanced.xml there are several grammer mistakes and
code listing 3 is incorrect. Although it is mostly trivial grammer corrections
the incorrect code listing can cause confusion.

Corrections attached as a diff.


Reproducible: Always
Steps to Reproduce:
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Comment 1 Curtis Napier (RETIRED) gentoo-dev

2005-06-09 10:16:38 UTC

Created attachment 60922 [details, diff]
hb-net-advanced.diff

Comment 2 Shyam Mani (RETIRED) gentoo-dev

2005-06-09 11:32:41 UTC

Fixed in CVS. Thanks!