Attachment 63424 Details for Bug 99058 – readability improvements!

[patch] readability improvements!

index.html.patch (text/plain), 2.57 KB, created by nm (RETIRED) on 2005-07-14 17:41:01 UTC

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Created: 2005-07-14 17:41:01 UTC

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>--- index.html.orig	2005-07-13 22:56:40.000000000 -0700
>+++ index.html	2005-07-13 23:09:35.000000000 -0700
>@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
> 
> <goals>
>   The intention of the project is to make SELinux available to more users, and
>-  improving it's integration.
>+  improving its integration.
>   Policy should be available for common daemons, and files merged in from Portage
>   should have the correct file context.  Currently we only work on servers, but
>   desktops will be supported in the future.
>@@ -94,16 +94,13 @@
> <section>
> <body>
> <p>
>-  SELinux can be installed new on a system by following the above install guide
>-  in the above handbook for your architecture.  If there is not an install guide
>-  for your architecuture yet, it is still possible to install by following the
>+  SELinux can be installed on a new system by following the above install guide
>+  for your architecture.  If there is not an install guide
>+  for your architecture yet, it is still possible to install by following the
>   <uri link="http://www.gentoo.org/doc/en/handbook/index.xml">Gentoo Handbook</uri>.
>   When the system is installed, convert it to SELinux by using the
>-  conversion guide in the handbook.
>-</p>
>-<p>
>-  Converting a preexisting Gentoo installation to SELinux can be done by
>-  following the conversion guide in the Handbook.
>+  conversion guide in the handbook. The conversion guide can also be used to convert 
>+  preexisting Gentoo installations.
> </p>
> </body>
> </section>
>@@ -122,7 +119,7 @@
>   <i>irc.freenode.net</i> for more information or just to chat about the project
>   or any subprojects. If you don&#39;t have the ability to actively help by
>   contributing work we will always need testers to use and audit the SELinux
>-  policies. All development, testing, and productive comments and feedback will
>+  policies. All development, testing, feedback, and productive comments will
>   be greatly appreciated.
> </p>
> </body>
>@@ -141,7 +138,7 @@
>   from the NSA example policy.
> </li>
> <li>
>-  The policy should cover common installations.  Please do not submit policy
>+  The policy should cover common installations.  Please do not submit policies
>   for odd or nonstandard daemon configurations.
> </li>
> <li>
>@@ -150,8 +147,8 @@
> </li>
> <li>
>   An ebuild for the policy can also be submitted to help the developers
>-  integrate the policy into portage more quickly, if it is accepted.  
>-  See current daemon policies in portage for example uses of the
>+  integrate the policy into Portage more quickly, if it is accepted.  
>+  See current daemon policies in Portage for example uses of the
>   selinux-policy eclass.
> </li>
> </ul>

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