[patch] Spelling + link addition changes

2.6-koutput.xml.spelling.diff (text/plain), 2.76 KB, created by Peter Johanson (RETIRED) on 2004-03-27 23:54:53 UTC

Index: 2.6-koutput.xml
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RCS file: /home/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/2.6-koutput.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -b -B -r1.2 2.6-koutput.xml
--- 2.6-koutput.xml	26 Mar 2004 23:09:42 -0000	1.2
+++ 2.6-koutput.xml	28 Mar 2004 07:48:25 -0000
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@
 
 <p>
 The details of how these elements interplay is somewhat complex. Hopefully the 
-following section will break the concepts into more easily digestable pieces, 
+following section will break the concepts into more easily digestible pieces, 
 such that developers and users wishing to enhance or use this new system will 
 have the knowledge needed to do so.
 </p>
@@ -219,12 +219,12 @@
 <path>.config</path> and <path>bzImage</path> will no longer be in 
 <path>/usr/src/linux</path> as they were before. <mail 
 link="[e-mail]">Peter Johanson</mail> has written a new 2.6 kernel 
-guide oriented at end users which emphasises the kbuild changes and in 
-particular the new locations of these files.
+guide found <uri
+link="http://www.gentoo.org/doc/en/2.6-koutput-user.xml">here</uri> oriented at
+end users which emphasizes the kbuild changes and in particular the new
+locations of these files.
 </p>
 
-<!-- TODO What guide? Where? -->
-
 </body>
 </section>
 </chapter>
@@ -429,11 +429,11 @@
 </pre>
 
 <p>
-Most ebuilds will generally need one patch to the makefiles to enabled outputing
-to a different directory, and then do some sedding if is_koutput() returns true.
-The example ebuild below will show how that is handled. For those ebuilds
-needing to more work by hand (nvidia-kernel is one), there are a few functions
-that may be called individually for more find grained control.
+Most ebuilds will generally need one patch to the makefiles to enabled
+outputting to a different directory, and then do some sedding if is_koutput()
+returns true.  The example ebuild below will show how that is handled. For those
+ebuilds needing to more work by hand (nvidia-kernel is one), there are a few
+functions that may be called individually for more find grained control.
 </p>
 
 <table>
@@ -604,9 +604,9 @@
 <c>KMOD_KOUTPUT_PATCH</c>. These can be set as needed to specify which 
 sources should be unpacked by kmod_src_unpack() and a file to patch if 
 we find that koutput is being used. <c>KMOD_KOUTPUT_PATCH</c> will
-<b>not</b> be applied if it is discovered that the 2.6 kernel is still outputing
-to <path>/usr/src/linux</path> in the old fasion. Here is a trimmed down version
-of the src_compile() function:
+<b>not</b> be applied if it is discovered that the 2.6 kernel is still
+outputting to <path>/usr/src/linux</path> in the old fashion. Here is a trimmed
+down version of the src_compile() function:
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="src_compile() function">