[patch] hb-install-medium.xml.diff

hb-install-medium.xml.diff (text/plain), 2.07 KB, created by Erwin (RETIRED) on 2003-12-06 23:15:23 UTC

--- cvs/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-medium.xml	2003-12-07 14:49:52.746688184 +0800
+++ hb-install-medium.xml	2003-12-07 15:09:01.150104328 +0800
@@ -587,13 +587,14 @@
     Now click on <c>OK</c> and then <c>Burn</c> (the CD-R)
   </li>
   <li>
-    With cdrecord, you simply type <c>cdrecord</c> followed by the path to the
-    ISO file :)
+    With cdrecord, you simply type <c>cdrecord dev=/dev/hdc</c> (replace
+    <path>/dev/hdc</path> with your CD-RW drive's device path) followed
+    by the path to the ISO file :)
   </li>
 </ul>
 
 <p>
-The following subsections explain how to boot the archicture-specific LiveCDs. 
+The following subsections explain how to boot the architecture-specific LiveCDs. 
 Be sure to pick the subsection which is relevant for your architecture. 
 </p>
 
@@ -617,7 +618,7 @@
 </impo>
 
 <p>
-Once you have burnt your installation CDs, it is time to boot them.
+Once you have burned your installation CDs, it is time to boot them.
 Reboot your system and enter the BIOS. This is usually done by hitting DEL, F1
 or ESC, depending on your BIOS. Inside the BIOS, change the boot
 order so that the CD-ROM is tried before the hard disk. This is often found
@@ -961,7 +962,7 @@
 </pre>
 
 <p>
-Now that you tweaked your kernel boot params, boot it.
+Now that you have tweaked your kernel boot params, boot it.
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Booting the kernel">
@@ -1125,7 +1126,7 @@
 If you are an advanced user, you might want to tweak the IDE hard disk
 performance using <c>hdparm</c>. With the <c>-tT</c> options you can
 test the performance of your disk (execute it several times to get a
-preciser impression):
+more precise impression):
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Testing disk performance">
@@ -1252,8 +1253,9 @@
     Now click on <c>OK</c> and then <c>Burn</c> (the CD-R)
   </li>
   <li>
-    With cdrecord, you simply type <c>cdrecord</c> followed by the path to the
-    ISO file :)
+    With cdrecord, you simply type <c>cdrecord dev=/dev/hdc</c> (replace
+    <path>/dev/hdc</path> with your CD-RW drive's device path) followed
+    by the path to the ISO file :)
   </li>
 </ul>