[patch] Gentoo Linux 1.4 Installation Instructions Here Syndrome Patch

gentoo-x86-install_here-syndrome.patch (text/plain), 4.86 KB, created by Steven Elling on 2003-10-25 09:42:22 UTC

--- htdocs-old/doc/en/gentoo-x86-install.xml	2003-09-30 04:35:20.000000000 -0500
+++ htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-install.xml	2003-10-21 00:31:29.000000000 -0500
@@ -1568,11 +1568,12 @@
 programs for you. To do this, edit the file <path>/etc/make.conf</path>.  In
 this file, you should set your USE flags, which specify optional
 functionality that you would like to be built into packages if available;
-generally, the defaults (an <e>empty</e> or unset USE variable) are
-fine.  More information on USE flags can be found <uri
-link="http://www.gentoo.org/doc/en/use-howto.xml">here</uri>.  A complete list
-of current USE flags can be found <uri
-link="http://www.gentoo.org/dyn/use-index.xml">here</uri>.  
+generally, the defaults (an <e>empty</e> or unset USE variable) are fine.
+More information on USE flags can be found in the <uri
+link="http://www.gentoo.org/doc/en/use-howto.xml">Gentoo Guide to USE
+flags</uri>.  A complete list of current USE flags can be found in the <uri
+link="http://www.gentoo.org/dyn/use-index.xml">Gentoo Linux Use Variable
+Descriptions</uri> document.  
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -1888,16 +1889,17 @@
 </p>
 	
 <p>
-Whether configuring a kernel by hand or using <c>genkernel</c>,
-you'll need to merge the Linux kernel sources you'd like to use.  
-Gentoo provides several kernel ebuilds; a list can be found 
-<uri link="/doc/en/gentoo-kernel.xml">here</uri>. If you are uncertain
-which kernel sources to choose, we advise using <c>gentoo-sources</c>.
-If you want XFS support, you should choose <c>xfs-sources</c> or 
-<c>gs-sources</c>. Gentoo's LiveCD uses <c>gs-sources</c> and 
-<c>xfs-sources</c>. There is also a <c>gaming-sources</c> kernel optimized 
-for game-playing responsiveness that works wonderfully for this purpose when 
-the "Preemptible kernel" option is enabled.
+Whether configuring a kernel by hand or using <c>genkernel</c>, you'll need
+to merge the Linux kernel sources you'd like to use.  Gentoo provides
+several kernel ebuilds; a list can be found in the <uri
+link="/doc/en/gentoo-kernel.xml">Gentoo Linux Kernel Guide</uri>. If you are
+uncertain which kernel sources to choose, we advise using
+<c>gentoo-sources</c>.  If you want XFS support, you should choose
+<c>xfs-sources</c> or <c>gs-sources</c>. Gentoo's LiveCD uses
+<c>gs-sources</c> and <c>xfs-sources</c>. There is also a
+<c>gaming-sources</c> kernel optimized for game-playing responsiveness that
+works wonderfully for this purpose when the "Preemptible kernel" option is
+enabled.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -2250,7 +2252,9 @@
 </pre>
 
 <impo>
-If you chose <c>metalogd</c>, please read <uri link="faq.xml#doc_chap6_sect3">this FAQ</uri> on metalogd's buffering.
+If you chose <c>metalogd</c>, please read <uri
+link="faq.xml#doc_chap6_sect3">Chapter 6, Section 3 of the Gentoo Linux
+FAQ</uri> on metalogd's buffering.
 </impo>
 
 <p>
@@ -2275,7 +2279,7 @@
 
 <p>
 For more information on starting programs and daemons at startup, see the
-<uri link="/doc/en/rc-scripts.xml">rc-script guide</uri>.
+<uri link="/doc/en/rc-scripts.xml">Gentoo Linux 1.0 Init System</uri> Guide.
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@@ -3035,22 +3039,22 @@
 </note>
 
 <p>
-If you have any questions or would like to get involved with Gentoo Linux 
-evelopment, consider joining our gentoo-user and gentoo-dev mailing lists
-(more information on our <uri 
+If you have any questions or would like to get involved with Gentoo Linux
+development, consider joining our gentoo-user and gentoo-dev mailing lists
+(more information on our <uri
 link="http://www.gentoo.org/main/en/lists.xml">mailing lists</uri> page).
-We also have a handy <uri 
-link="http://www.gentoo.org/doc/en/desktop.xml">Desktop configuration 
-guide</uri> that will help you to continue configuring your new Gentoo Linux 
-system and a useful <uri 
-link="http://www.gentoo.org/doc/en/portage-user.xml">Portage user guide</uri>
-to help familiarize you with Portage basics. You can find the rest of the 
-Gentoo Documentation <uri 
-link="http://www.gentoo.org/main/en/docs.xml">here</uri>. If you have any 
-other questions involving installation or anything for that matter, please 
-check the Gentoo Linux <uri 
-link="http://www.gentoo.org/doc/en/faq.xml">FAQ</uri>. Enjoy and welcome to 
-Gentoo Linux!
+We also have a handy <uri
+link="http://www.gentoo.org/doc/en/desktop.xml">Desktop Configuration
+Guide</uri> that will help you to continue configuring your new Gentoo Linux
+system and a useful <uri
+link="http://www.gentoo.org/doc/en/portage-user.xml">Portage User
+Guide</uri> to help familiarize you with Portage basics. You can find the
+rest of the Gentoo Documentation on our <uri
+link="http://www.gentoo.org/main/en/docs.xml">Gentoo Linux User
+Documentation Resources</uri> page. If you have any other questions
+involving installation or anything for that matter, please check the <uri
+link="http://www.gentoo.org/doc/en/faq.xml">Gentoo Linux FAQ</uri>. Enjoy
+and welcome to Gentoo Linux!
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