--- tar.1~	2007-05-18 11:07:36.000000000 +0000
+++ tar.1	2007-05-18 11:09:18.000000000 +0000
@@ -623,11 +623,11 @@
 .BR -[0-7][lmh]
 specify drive and density
 .SH BUGS
-The GNU folks, in general, abhor man pages, and create info documents instead.
-The maintainer of \fBtar\fR falls into this category.  Thus this man page may 
-not be complete, nor current, and was included in the Gentoo portage tree 
+The GNU folks, in general, abhor man pages and create info documents instead.
+The maintainer of \fBtar\fR falls into this category.  Thus, this man page may 
+not be complete nor current, and it is included in the Gentoo portage tree 
 because man is a great tool :).  This man page was first taken from Debian 
-Linux and has since been loving updated here.
+Linux and has since been lovingly updated here.
 .SH "REPORTING BUGS"
 Please report bugs via http://bugs.gentoo.org/
 .SH "AUTHORS"